Writing: SENTENCES Independent & dependent clauses.

Task desertion p: This is our writing for the week.
WALT: to construct effective sentences.  Week 9 - writing 2019. WALT: to construct effective sentences.

FUN GAME Writing; pass story version 1

WALT: Punctuate our work

Original version

Hi my name is someone and i have no friend at home at school and in my something
I look like a fire breathing monster in greek and if you don't no then look it up man.     Ha ola ha ha h ha ha ha man MR GOODWIN you are so cool. Yeah your like the best good looking man. But i also good looking but they don’t notice it hehe. I only have one friend and his name is wonky he also has a mold on his nose and it is black and big. He isn’t very pretty but I still like him he is my only friend I have because no one likes me and I’m very sad about it. I want some more friends but no one notices me, I sit alone at lunch and wait for wonky to sit with me. I waited for a very long time but no one showed up until he did…. He was wearing a robe and it was covering all of his face. Once when I got to class there was a kid next to me he said “Hello Sir. I don't understand why kids don’t often like u. “Well it all started of with my mold on my nose” There were kids behind me saying “Hello Sir I know u don’t have friends because of ur mold but no one likes u but yourself said the meanie” At Least if I changed my face I would of got friends. The Kid next to me said “Don’t worry don’t let those bullies get in ur way I’ll keep out for u and be ur friend” u Kids stop bullying other people how would u like it if other people bullied u. “ I will feel Great” U STOP LYING U FEEL EMBARRASSED AND SAD” NO I WOULDN'T. YES U WILL. “Hello Kids said the teacher.



Edited version


Hi my name is someone and i have no friend at home at school and in my something
I look like a fire breathing monster in greek and if you don't no then look it up man.     Ha ola ha ha h ha ha ha man MR GOODWIN you are so cool. Yeah your like the best good looking man. But i,m also good looking but they don’t notice it hehehe. I only have one friend and his name is wonky the donkey and also has a mold on his nose and it is black and big. He isn’t very pretty but I still like him he is my only friend I have because no one likes me and I’m very sad about it. I want some more friends but no one notices me, I sit alone at lunch and wait for wonky to sit with me. I waited for a very long time but no one showed up until he did…. He was wearing a robe and it was covering all of his face. Once when I got to class there was a kid next to me he said “Hello Sir. I don't understand why kids don’t often like u. “Well it all started of with my mold on my nose” There were kids behind me saying “Hello Sir I know u don’t have friends because of ur mold but no one likes u but yourself said the meanie” At Least if I changed my face I would go and get so friends. The Kid next to me said “Don’t worry don’t let those bullies get in ur way I’ll keep out for u and be ur friend” u Kids stop bullying other people how would u like it if other people bullied u. “ I will feel Great” U STOP LYING U FEEL EMBARRASSED AND SAD” NO I WOULDN'T. YES U WILL. “Hello Kids said the teacher. Hi mum i mean dad wait teacher sorry he … he he he he he he he he he he he wait…………………………………. Ok miss HHHHHHHHH EEEEEEEE
DID NOTHING OK MISS !!!!!!!!

TASK Description:

we played the game 'pass the story'. we would write a little bit of the story, and then

pass it to the person next to us. they would then continue on the story. after the story

 was finished, we edited it to make sure it was p unction properly.

Writing: about camp.

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Last week we had our year  5&6 camp at school. Camp at school was like you were at a new world. It was so fun that it was cool just like the movie cool camp kid.

Camp is something you do at school some time all of the year 5 and 6 was in the hall waiting for someone. We did camp at school and it was fun but then something went wrong Just joking it was so fun the best ever.why did we do camp at school

case when we are a year 7 it is going to be hard like i mean hard so the why i like year 5 and 6 we went to the Manger Pools Kayaking Killer zone Cyclone Ball Slip and Slide Concert Night/ Practice Movie night - Small Foot Hall Activities: Skateboarding Scooters Ramps Ping pong/ Table tennis Trampoline/ Flip mat Jump Jam House captains; mataio kurast, tahela and laete. We ate nice food from miss Timmy and the helps.

My favorite highlight  was kayaking. The thing i like about kayak er is that you can go so far but not like so so far cause we need to stay in side of the triangles but when miss ask me if i want to go to the Orange floating

Thing and i said yes and so i went to it with her then when we just went we had to go back to miss west and the help,s.

Sip and slide was the cool thing that i seen on camp. I went the farrist on slip and slide and it was amazing that i hit myself.

Thank you to all of the help that did the food and the help that was doing security doing the tent. It was amazing and i like it cause you cord go on camp one day.

What i learn About myself is that i can make heap of friend either if they are a boy or girl. I had lot of fun at camp and it was cool. Camp is fun cool amazing and more amazing. 

Maths: scout the perimeter 2

Task Desertion: This is our math,s problem working for our math,s.
Today our math,s work is Scout the perimeter #2.

Reading: journal word find on the mend by zana bell

Reading: Alphabetical on the Mend

Task description: Mr Goodwin said that we can do any of the book. their
were nine different book in our book box. the book i chose was on the
mend by zana bell.

Writing: Write Like A Year 6

This was my writing task for this week and last week. This was very challenging and I needed a little bit of time to finish off my writing. This was super fun and I always love to challenge my mind. It was also a bit hard because I had to write like a year 6.

Maths task: Shapes and symmetry.

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Walt:  recognise shapes and sides.

task description: This is my second math task for this week. For this task I had to draw the shape on the other side of the page. This was super fun because I had a race with my friend to see who was the fastest. It was super easy. It became a tie.

Shapes on shapes

Task description:
Today this is our math work that we have to do and it is call
shapes on shapes.

On the trail

Hi my name is Ozzy, and this book is, call on the trail.
and on the trail, is like a bike, thing but the motor-cross,
is not like a bike, or a skota or a motor-bike, it is like
one but, a little difteen to the, motor-bike.

A motor-bike is more bigger, than a motor-cross
and cool, and also faster then it, but there is one
thing, that can run your foot, or leg and that
will have, to be the very big, Wheel.

The wheel is so big, just the same size as, a
my two leg i ,im 10 and fast but a, little
bit skine and a, tene bit of fat not, so fat
and if you, now how big i im, then try
and look for, a image.

the motor-cross's, wheel is a little
small and, it can go so fast but
not like, a motor-bike cause
a motor-bike is fast, just like
you saw noting coming,.
 
motor-cross is like a 24
meter away from each other
and that is the last writing i am
doing by

On the trail

BY  JULIE ORR-WILSON NICK 

WILSON TALKS TO JULI ORR-WILSON ABOUT TRAIL RIDING.