Original version
Hi my name is someone and i have no friend at home at school and in my something
I look like a fire breathing monster in greek and if you don't no then look it up man. Ha ola ha ha h ha ha ha man MR GOODWIN you are so cool. Yeah your like the best good looking man. But i also good looking but they don’t notice it hehe. I only have one friend and his name is wonky he also has a mold on his nose and it is black and big. He isn’t very pretty but I still like him he is my only friend I have because no one likes me and I’m very sad about it. I want some more friends but no one notices me, I sit alone at lunch and wait for wonky to sit with me. I waited for a very long time but no one showed up until he did…. He was wearing a robe and it was covering all of his face. Once when I got to class there was a kid next to me he said “Hello Sir. I don't understand why kids don’t often like u. “Well it all started of with my mold on my nose” There were kids behind me saying “Hello Sir I know u don’t have friends because of ur mold but no one likes u but yourself said the meanie” At Least if I changed my face I would of got friends. The Kid next to me said “Don’t worry don’t let those bullies get in ur way I’ll keep out for u and be ur friend” u Kids stop bullying other people how would u like it if other people bullied u. “ I will feel Great” U STOP LYING U FEEL EMBARRASSED AND SAD” NO I WOULDN'T. YES U WILL. “Hello Kids said the teacher.
Edited version
Hi my name is someone and i have no friend at home at school and in my something
I look like a fire breathing monster in greek and if you don't no then look it up man. Ha ola ha ha h ha ha ha man MR GOODWIN you are so cool. Yeah your like the best good looking man. But i,m also good looking but they don’t notice it hehehe. I only have one friend and his name is wonky the donkey and also has a mold on his nose and it is black and big. He isn’t very pretty but I still like him he is my only friend I have because no one likes me and I’m very sad about it. I want some more friends but no one notices me, I sit alone at lunch and wait for wonky to sit with me. I waited for a very long time but no one showed up until he did…. He was wearing a robe and it was covering all of his face. Once when I got to class there was a kid next to me he said “Hello Sir. I don't understand why kids don’t often like u. “Well it all started of with my mold on my nose” There were kids behind me saying “Hello Sir I know u don’t have friends because of ur mold but no one likes u but yourself said the meanie” At Least if I changed my face I would go and get so friends. The Kid next to me said “Don’t worry don’t let those bullies get in ur way I’ll keep out for u and be ur friend” u Kids stop bullying other people how would u like it if other people bullied u. “ I will feel Great” U STOP LYING U FEEL EMBARRASSED AND SAD” NO I WOULDN'T. YES U WILL. “Hello Kids said the teacher. Hi mum i mean dad wait teacher sorry he … he he he he he he he he he he he wait…………………………………. Ok miss HHHHHHHHH EEEEEEEE
DID NOTHING OK MISS !!!!!!!!
TASK Description:
we played the game 'pass the story'. we would write a little bit of the story, and then
pass it to the person next to us. they would then continue on the story. after the story
was finished, we edited it to make sure it was p unction properly.
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